In this awesome pattern of things you secure a B- just for hard work. Where you actually confused me personally was on your specifics. You know, as the maxim goes, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be more true here. Having said that, let me tell you exactly what did give good results. The article (parts of it) is quite persuasive which is possibly the reason why I am making an effort in order to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, although I can see a jumps in reason you come up with, I am definitely not confident of exactly how you seem to unite your points which in turn help to make the final result. For now I will, no doubt yield to your point but hope in the foreseeable future you actually link your facts much better.